Alright i agree almost 100% with all the other 1 star raters. Yeah he obviously put a lot of effort into the book but that effort was merely stealing other authors ideas, characters, worlds etc. Being fifteen and having your book published would be something to commend but his parents published it. The story itself was rather boring, i quit reading it. The plot, if there was one, was horrible. When you know what's going to happen next at every turn you know the book is going to be bad. If you've read any other fantasy books, RA Salvatore being one of my favorites, Paloni's (or however you spell his last name) characters pale in comparison. I recomend for all of you 5 star raters to read any other fantasy book, not including harry potter which is an easy read. Maybe Salvatore's Trilolgies and his Quintet will make you see how bad this book really is.